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You dont understand |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho 
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I’ve thought a lot about you and me And I realize you no longer love me I cant tell you how many nights I’ve cried You don’t even notice anymore You don’t hug me like you used to You don’t kiss me like you used to You don’t touch me like you used to The way you once held me The way you once kissed me The way you onced loved me Why do I feel so lost Why do I feel so scared Why do I feel so small My life is empty My life is lonely My life is hollow This world is tearing me apart This world is driving me insane This world is torturing my soul I’m hurting, and I’m scared Its all because of how you used to love me Its all because of how you used to hold me Its all because of how you used to care for me ************************************************ I wrote this a while back when i left my husband...we have since fixed things...but this was how i was feeling at the time Written by Destiny Copyright 2004 Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel MSN Messenger: Destinys_Fallen_Angel AOL/AIM: Eternityshyann |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I can relate |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Been there and done that -- hope things work out for you. This really does express those feelings well.  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
another relater here. been ther felt that. still do  |
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Destinys_Fallen_Angel Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 75Boise Idaho |
Thank you all for your feed back its greatly appreciated...as of lately i have been struggling to write...to even come up with a topic or idea...and then i came here and there are so many gifted poets...its amazing to read the works put together here...others poems, their feedbacks...i believe poetry is a window to the soul...and i'm privleged to be allowed to look at others souls... My most sincere thanks Destiny Yahoo messenger: destinys_Falen_Angel |
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