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exhale
Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646
Alberta,Canada

0 posted 2004-05-13 08:15 PM


its 12:17am and your all thats on my mind
i thought i was done
i thought this emotion was ruined
past loves
broken heart
after broken heart
after broken heart
i thought i was done
it feels like my fresh wound
has turned into a scar
making me wish i didn't know myself
making me wish i didn't know you
i don't want to feel this again
my scars haunt me
yet my heart keeps pumping
awaiting a new challenge
awaiting another chance at love
at life
with hope
my heart feels like it was filled with sparks
ready to jump out of my chest
and into your arms..

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Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2004-05-13 08:19 PM


"awaiting another chance at love
at life
with hope
my heart feels like it was filled with sparks
ready to jump out of my chest
and into your arms.."

Beautiful..with such a passionate ache.
Very much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
Dancing with you in the summer rain~

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
2 posted 2004-05-13 08:23 PM


Wounded, yet hopeful.  Soul touching.

Susan

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2004-05-15 12:13 PM


Intense...James
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2004-05-15 04:25 AM


I know this...toooooo well
Goldenrose
Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665

5 posted 2004-05-15 05:15 AM


Very well expressed ..enjoyed reading...

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
6 posted 2004-05-15 03:01 PM


Oi, Vai

Aren’t we all alike?  It’s amazing.  I guess it’s the moth to the flame syndrome.
Great write.  So true to life.  Really enjoyed this.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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