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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-05-13 05:41 PM


Poetic Thirsting


It's not often I allow myself seen in this condition.
Through and through, I'm doused with thought when I am on this mission.
Back and forth and round and round, the motor always whirring.
And as I push and pull and turn, poetic mind is stirring.

Slow it comes until I'm soaked and salted into drenching.
But do I drink of water? Not...instead I sit here quenching.


M
**was worried that this might be misinterpreted and possibly sent to Mature...
but I was mowng the lawn earlier

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2004 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
1 posted 2004-05-13 05:43 PM


i like it just where it is
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2 posted 2004-05-13 05:46 PM


MzBliss~
Love the word-whirring~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-05-13 05:49 PM


Thanks Helen...and Margie...boy are we having your kind of weather..almost 90's in May...

for a week aready...my body is trying to adjust from the 60's the few days before.


M



Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2004-05-13 06:00 PM


Yes hot here as well Maureen....
Seems we missed Spring this year.
Well done.
Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

JL
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5 posted 2004-05-14 04:37 PM


Cool!
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


iliana
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6 posted 2004-05-14 04:51 PM


I can still feel the vibration of the lawn mower in the rhythm, M.  Great write!  
Toerag
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7 posted 2004-05-14 04:57 PM


I know, your were fantasizing about me...right?...NO?....LOL...I like it right where it's at too...(of course, right here next to me on my select comfort mattress would even be better?
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