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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-05-13 05:33 PM

Did You Know I Rain?

I have felt you in my bones
and recognize your voice
softly above the thunder
my sheets scream your skin
where loneliness and alone
is far deeper than the darkness
night is just the other side of day
finding life slowly suspended here
in a fresh supply of daily water
I soon need to release this pour
rhyming patterns of droplets fall
no need to deny the action of clouds
dried from a drum in sky beat
distance is such a heavy storm
when lightening strikes with rain

© Copyright 2004 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-05-13 05:39 PM

love your thoughts this evening, Helen..I hope you are progressing well

hugs
M

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2 posted 2004-05-13 05:48 PM

OneSlick~

'distance is such a heavy storm'

Oh my ... what a line-of-thought~

Love the word-pour~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-05-13 05:57 PM

Wonderful write Helen....much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Larry C

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4 posted 2004-05-13 08:23 PM

helen,
I did not know you rain. But I did know you rule!

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

5 posted 2004-05-13 08:26 PM

I have felt you in my bones

This line holds such depth. Enjoyed the entire write.

Susan

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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USA

6 posted 2004-05-14 06:27 PM

Don't know how I missed this one, Helen, but I'm glad I saw it. The anaologies were great!

JL
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since 2004-04-01

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Texas, USA

7 posted 2004-05-14 06:33 PM

Wow! This is a stunning write.
Enjoyed very much.
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

passing shadows
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displaced

8 posted 2004-05-15 04:38 AM

beautiful...

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

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in the shadows

9 posted 2004-05-15 11:17 AM

Rain???

Why, I bet you can hurricane!!!

I like this picture. (of course, I liked the others also.)

VAS
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since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

10 posted 2004-05-15 12:52 PM

Powerful!!!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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