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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-05-13 05:30 PM


Fallen Soldiers  (Scars of War)

Loved ones still
cry themselves
to sleep at night.
Not understanding
why men have to fight.

Do those that die
find rest for
their souls?

Loved ones hope
and pray that there
is a beautiful place
where fallen soldiers go.

Over fifty thousand American soldiers
died in a war they never ask for.
One million Vietnamese soldiers died.
Freedom was their battle cry.

One life, too many to sacrifice
for something so mean spirited
and violent as war.

Thousand more, still live with mental
and physical pain and anguish as
they carry the scars of war.

JamesLee
May13
2004

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Larry C
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1 posted 2004-05-13 05:51 PM


James,
Here's to hoping we find a better way. I feel your pain.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Enchantress
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2 posted 2004-05-13 05:58 PM


Excellent thought provoking write James...well done.
Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Margherita
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3 posted 2004-05-13 05:58 PM


Yes James, war is wrong, if we continue like this, killing each other, humanity as a whole is at risk.
May we learn to handle problems peacefully, without shedding blood.
Thank you for sharing your compassionate thoughts.
Love, Margherita

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2004-05-13 06:01 PM


JamesMichael~

Such a stirring write~

'Do those that die
find rest for
their souls?

Loved ones hope
and pray that there
is a beautiful place
where fallen soldiers go.'


I believe that just as each man fights for what he believes is right ... each man will be accorded that which God believes is right for the soul~

Thank you for this ponderous penning, my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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Susan
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walking the surreal
5 posted 2004-05-13 08:49 PM


Unfortunately war happens.  As a daughter, grandaughter, sister, aunt, cousin and wife of Veterans, many VFWs, some engaged in war at this time, I know intimately the price of war. But too, I know that because of these couragous souls, I can go to bed at night not worrying if my words spoken during the day could cause myself or my family great harm.  I wish we could all just love one another and let peace be in our hearts.  But sadly, we also must bear the price of freedom.  We just need to remember to go to war only for the right reasons.  
   Excellent write.  It speaks truth of the tragic casulties of such sorrow.

Susan

Opeth
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6 posted 2004-05-13 09:27 PM


The only consolation out of all of this is that those who fight and die, in our country anyway, choose to... they know what they are fighting for.


pictureme
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since 2003-11-28
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7 posted 2004-05-13 09:37 PM


War is hell on earth
continue to pray for peace!
thanks for sharing the write!
pictureme :-)

inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2004-05-13 10:50 PM


pray for peace

iliana
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9 posted 2004-05-14 06:29 PM


JamesMichael -- thank you for sharing this special poem -- you wrote it so well and with such conviction.  
JL
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10 posted 2004-05-14 06:41 PM


Enjoyed this Pal…
I believe all military men who have died have gone to join our Creator in Heaven.  He will answer their whys.  God bless them and their families, and you for this poem.

JL


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