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Mysteria
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0 posted 2004-05-13 12:48 PM





~* Wishing *~


I’m wishing for my wish to come true,
As I hold gaze of moon and star just now.
I’m wishing to become all these things,
If there were only a way, somehow.

I’m wishing to become the morning sun,
Waking you with a kiss each day.
I’m wishing to be the midnight moon
There to mark your steps along the way.

I’m wishing to become a gentle wind
Softly caressing you with every touch.
I’m wishing to be your favorite color,
That color you love so much.

If I could become waves in the ocean
My tides could wash away the blue of you.
I could become the brightest star above
I'd make your every wish come true.

If I could have but one simple wish
Then here is what it would be;
That I could bind your heart to mine
For now, and through all eternity.



Today I'm only moving clouds, tomorrow I'll try mountains.

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1 posted 2004-05-13 12:56 PM


Gawd Sharon, this is beautiful.  I have missed your words. Hugs
JL
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2 posted 2004-05-13 01:09 PM


Very nice poetry.  Great read.
JL

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3 posted 2004-05-13 01:33 PM


That I could bind your heart to mine
For now, and through all eternity.

~*~

A beautiful wish, Mysteria.  It is good to see you writing and sharing with us once more!

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4 posted 2004-05-13 02:42 PM


Sharon

I wish all your wishes to come true.  

Susan
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5 posted 2004-05-13 02:45 PM


I absolutely love this.  So beautifully romantic.  And the picture posted with it is perfect.  Thanks!

Susan

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6 posted 2004-05-13 03:10 PM


And I wish that all your wishes come true.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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7 posted 2004-05-14 01:53 AM


I actually wrote this for the romantic, optimistic dreamers out there, but thank you.  I have had a lot of wishes come true and have learned to be careful what I now wish for Thank you all for the read.  
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8 posted 2004-05-14 07:02 AM


"If I could become waves in the ocean
My tides could wash away the blue of you.
I could become the brightest star above
I'd make your every wish come true."


What a tender sweet melodic piece, Sharon.  Loved the stanza above. Just beautiful.  If I had a wish ...

I'd wish .... that you'd write more often.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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9 posted 2004-05-14 07:14 AM


I’m wishing to become a gentle wind
Softly caressing you with every touch.
I’m wishing to be your favorite color,
That color you love so much.


Simply lovely, Mysteria, you are beautiful..both inside and out...love your picture...what light shines in your eyes.  

Smiles and hugs

ESP
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10 posted 2004-05-14 07:46 AM


It's beautiful...and I have also made too many wishes like this! *Sigh*
~Liz

"Time has told me not to ask for more, one day our ocean will find its shore" ~Nick Drake

Nan
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11 posted 2004-05-14 08:05 AM


You ARE your wish already, my friend...
Sudhir Iyer
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12 posted 2004-05-14 08:16 AM


How very lovely...

Regards
Sudhir

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13 posted 2004-05-14 12:24 PM


just beautiful...gorgeous picture too

by the way...I reposted "The Planetarium" for you. It fell to the bottom somewhere so I'm not sure if you saw it...this place goes quick!

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14 posted 2004-05-14 12:34 PM


Mysteria -- this is a really pretty poem -- and I just adore the picture you chose to put with it, too!  
iliana
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15 posted 2004-05-14 12:34 PM


Mysteria -- this is a really pretty poem -- and I just adore the picture you chose to put with it, too!  
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16 posted 2004-05-15 02:52 AM


You all are so darn sweet, no wonder I hang out here in my every spare moment.  Thanks again, and dontca just love the feel of summer on your skin?  Enjoy!
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