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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2004-05-13 07:24 AM


Tomorrow

Tomorrow is the day I seek
It’s just beyond horizons peak
And though I sail and sail and sail
It seems to me to no avail

I cannot fix a point of stay
But only reach the end of day
And in the vast and starry night
I cannot seem to see the light

I’ve sailed a rainbow to its last
And found but echoes of the past
Gone beyond the rivers bend
Yet still, yet still, I find no end

Perhaps the very end I seek
Has no other side or cheek
Perhaps it is the sigh of I
The I of I and echo cry.

I point my finger at the glean
And all I see are fields of green.


© Copyright 2004 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression
1 posted 2004-05-13 07:39 AM


I enjoy sailing,
Far too often it is just wishfully
Enjoyed the poem, wish I was sailing in a tall ship

Gloom

scorpio
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since 2002-10-02
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right...there
2 posted 2004-05-13 08:34 AM


Sy as long as there's wind in your sails you'll reach tomorrow.  The key is to enjoy the journey.  

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2004-05-13 08:51 AM


I love sailing off into dreamland Sy....
This is a wonderful morning write.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2004-05-13 09:24 AM



and, the Sun will come out, tomorrow...



the devil made me do it!

oops!


wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
5 posted 2004-05-13 10:47 AM


Green fields ain't so bad...lol
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
6 posted 2004-05-13 11:03 AM


Good morning, Sir T!

Tomorrow sometimes does not come,
So live today and have some fun,
But if you look to starry night,
You will find your guiding Light.

Sending you oodles of struedels to put a smile on your sweet sonneteering physiognomy!

EA


passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-05-13 12:21 PM


a little inspiring for my day today, yes
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