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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2004-05-13 06:28 AM



Always Dance Like No One's Watching

I visit the warmth now
as if it is the comfort of each day,
wrapping me in inspiration,
coloring me in a shade of affection.
The slant of you, bringing a touch of pleasure
in unexpected places.

If it is a reader's embrace, then my eyes
rise in the morning's light, viewing what is,
defining my thankfulness in dance...


M

*inspired


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-13-2004 08:25 AM).]

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1 posted 2004-05-13 06:37 AM


this feels good
ice
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2 posted 2004-05-13 06:46 AM


A beautiful poem that moves with the grace of a dancer...
Nice to feel this poem at this early morning hour, makes this reader wake fully..
Like Jonathan Livingston Seagull, your poetry never stalls, but takes the reader to heights beyond the ending of the words...Thanks for the dance...
------------ice
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3 posted 2004-05-13 07:10 AM


Yes, very nice!  Inspired by a master to a good pupil.  I can relate.
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4 posted 2004-05-13 09:19 AM


Very inspired by your words and the feelings they convey....Such welcome words for me this morning and such a delight ~P
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5 posted 2004-05-13 12:35 PM


needed for my day today...much needed
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6 posted 2004-05-13 12:43 PM


Yeah, very nice poetry.
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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7 posted 2004-05-13 12:55 PM


MyFriend~
Such lightness in lift of dancing feet is this~
A lovely you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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8 posted 2004-05-13 12:58 PM


lovely M~
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9 posted 2004-05-13 01:54 PM


Maureen

Everyone should be inspired like this, at least once.  Lovely!!

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10 posted 2004-05-13 02:02 PM



*smiling* with you....

Margherita
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11 posted 2004-05-13 06:22 PM


"Wrapped in inspiration" you dance quite beautifully.
Love, Margherita

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12 posted 2004-05-13 06:30 PM


Absolutely love the title.
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