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Game Over |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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hiding 'hind a poker face security in blank of stare... beyond the hypnotize of eyes in realize of rules unfair in unawares of ace in sleeve... the cards were cut in confidence and quicker than the eye can see a heart was dealt from 'neath the deck... illusion of a winning hand with joker in his dance of wild as if he knows the fates to be... and in his knowing smiles... the poker face is growing tired... the game the same with every hand the chips are down no bluffing now the final round... I call |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
this was really good |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Glad to see you're still in the game, m'friend... This is a good poem too, btw...  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ This is playing the word-hand you're dealt~ EXCELLENT !!!  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great write! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Wow! I'm out... JL She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky In my book, you are always a winner! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i call....... you go girl words of strenght from WOMAN |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent Vicky!! You win hands down. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Vicki, It's nice to know you're still in the groove. Smooth write. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This has layers, sweetie... and there's more at stake than the pot of gold... Well done! |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WOW, this was great fun to read, so clever, clever written.  The Jokers are out, I suppose  Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
love it Mum ^_^ |
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