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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2004-05-12 08:53 PM




Simple Majesties

The eye of a storm
Building within blinks of time
Thus, I pray to Thee



Simple majesties
Pointing lights that lead the way
If one would believe.

~*~

Photography, courtesy of Janet Marie


Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?  Keeping in mind, I must stand close...

© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2004-05-12 09:26 PM


Karilea

So beautiful...your words make Janet Marie's photo come alive.  

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2 posted 2004-05-12 10:34 PM


you are soooooo lovely.....

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

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3 posted 2004-05-12 10:45 PM


I couldn't agree more with those who responded! You'are one AOK poetess!  This is
marvelous writing.
              Sadie

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4 posted 2004-05-12 10:50 PM


Spectacular Karilea...as is JM's photo!!

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5 posted 2004-05-13 09:05 AM


yes.. if one would believe.. lovely Karilea

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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6 posted 2004-05-13 09:09 AM


Stunning iamge and powerful words....
"If only"   Yes, ~P

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7 posted 2004-05-13 09:27 AM


beautiful.......just beautiful...thank you for sharing this
Margherita
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8 posted 2004-05-13 09:52 AM


I do believe …. these Nature Majesties are overwhelming. As is your poem and Janet’s picture.

Love, Margherita

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9 posted 2004-05-13 10:00 AM


Beautiful poem... And it complements the image perfectly... Wonderful.
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10 posted 2004-05-13 10:27 AM


A beautiful marriage of art - poetry and photography!

And an peom of inspiration!

I didn't know Janet Marie was a photographer!


Corinne

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11 posted 2004-05-13 11:16 AM


You and JM make a divine duo! Absolutely stunning post, both poetically and pictorally! Thanks, girls!

Look to the skies!

Linda


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12 posted 2004-05-13 12:19 PM


I loved that photo (if you look in the center of it there is a streak like a reverse shooting star,) now what could point the direction more clearly than that?  You did this photography justice that is for sure!  
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13 posted 2004-05-13 12:31 PM


I read you and I can only sigh
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14 posted 2004-05-13 12:35 PM


A lovely coupling of picture and poem.  We need a word here..you've created a "poemscape"??  KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

JL
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15 posted 2004-05-13 12:48 PM


Inspirational to say the least!  Enjoyed.
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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16 posted 2004-05-13 12:57 PM


beautiful!
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17 posted 2004-05-14 07:23 AM


Stunning picture, beautiful words sistering the entire presentation...Sunshine...did you see the photos of those tornadoes on the news last night?  Incredible close up pics of incredible weather.  Happy Friday and have a great day
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18 posted 2004-05-14 07:24 AM


great pic and a great write...

regards
sudhir

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19 posted 2004-05-15 09:06 AM


Ever the tardy moth....just wanted to pop in and say thank you Kari, for framing my pic in your enlightening words...Im honored you found inspiration in my photo...
Heaven knows theres no shortage of them LOL
took 8 rolls in the last 2 days.

I love you more the further I go ...
before this existence ... you were always here inside of me.

Nelly Furtado


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20 posted 2004-05-15 09:17 AM


Your words compliment Janet Marie's photograph.  And combined they inspire.

believe in what your heart feels...

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