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Snow
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0 posted 2004-05-12 08:50 PM





Garden #3

beneath the skin
below the secret
      untapped madness
within latin wave rolling
hips, we curl
           two into one
bound and breathless
while from throats
long closed
our screams
     find reason

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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1 posted 2004-05-12 09:43 PM



Snow, your artistry is showing....

and it is studio worthy...

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2 posted 2004-05-12 10:17 PM


a masterpiece snowy love the pic too

Snow
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3 posted 2004-05-13 01:37 AM


thank you both so very much!!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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4 posted 2004-05-13 10:11 AM


stunning, my lady... simply stunning
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5 posted 2004-05-13 11:26 AM


LadySnow~
A breathtaking beauty is this~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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6 posted 2004-05-13 12:25 PM


incredible...you are so good at these!
JL
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7 posted 2004-05-13 01:45 PM


Very nice imagery.
JL

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8 posted 2004-05-14 04:36 AM


Snow, this was graced with lovely artistry, both in word and scene!   ...jo
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9 posted 2004-05-14 04:58 AM


Very good writing snow.....enjoyed this...thank you...

Goldenrose.

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My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

Snow
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10 posted 2004-05-15 08:59 PM


thank you all very much!

"yet each man kills the thing he loves
by each let this be heard,
some do it with a bitter look,
some with a flattering word"
oscar wilde

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