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Bonnie j
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0 posted 2004-05-12 05:08 PM


Sweet Longings

In thirty to forty-five minutes you will be at my front
door.
I wait with anticipation, my excitement growing.
I pace the floor longing to have you once again in my
loving hands.....................To hold you.
I close my eyes I see your beauty,
your tenderness,
your unique coloring, you are so inviting and
incredible.
I taste you upon my sensitive lips, sweet and tender,
melting within my delicate mouth.
You’re at the door-
I reach for you tenderly.
Oh!.............You are so tempting, your aroma
filling my nostrils with uncontrollable desire.
How can I resist?
This longing I cannot control.
Oh!
You smell so delectable-
PIZZA..

Love Bon-Bon

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JL
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1 posted 2004-05-12 05:25 PM


Haahaa-Heehee.  Had me going!  Great one Bonnie J.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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2 posted 2004-05-12 07:17 PM


hahah...cute

and tasty

Susan
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3 posted 2004-05-12 08:21 PM


Oh yeah, I'm there!

Susan

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4 posted 2004-05-12 08:31 PM


Bon-Bon, this is good. It sure didn't
sound like pizza. LOL I do love
pepperoni pizza though...with extra cheese and pepperoni.
Hugs,
Ethel

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5 posted 2004-05-12 09:10 PM


good one!!


Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2004-05-13 09:48 PM


BonBon!!!!
Oh thanks a LOT !
Now I'm salivating for a thin-crust pizza with extra pepperoni and cheese !!!!

This is sooooooooo cute ... dadgum it !!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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pictureme
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7 posted 2004-05-13 09:59 PM


Been there done that,
and I've ordered pizza too. :-)
nice write that made me grin and hungary!
thanks for sharing,
pictureme :-)

LeeJ
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8 posted 2004-05-14 07:19 AM


hehehhehehhehe, oh man, now I'm hungry for pizza...extremely witty and fun...enjoyed.

Hiya sis, how ya doing?     wishing you the best Friday and weekend ahead.  

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