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Constance
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since 2001-07-28
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0 posted 2004-05-12 02:41 PM



Spring

I understand the urgency of Spring,
Though I plodded stupidly, unseeing,
Past the pain of earth’s hard birthing.
Until today.

April agonized and wept,
And fetal, sleeping things no longer slept,
Yawning, stretching nature can’t be kept,
From seeking May.


© Copyright 2004 Constance M. Lessard - All Rights Reserved
Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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1 posted 2004-05-12 03:15 PM


Enjoyed this, one suggestion though; foolishly would work much better than stupidly
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
2 posted 2004-05-12 03:36 PM


Great write!
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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