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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-05-12 10:34 AM

Those planned and pearled directions
Seem distant purposed resurrections
The ones engraved in stone
Set back against a neutral tone

How wide the ripple of a touch
Be hard or soft the fathom such
In monotone convections
Embrace of recollections

The map was drawn on sail and sea
Storms sent in time to wage decree
Emotions walked the canyon floors
Against the tide the sky implores

How deep the imprint of a scar
Indelible as time sends far
A call predestined in the bone
Returning echo motions home

The toss of penny calculations
Thrown to the wind in steady rations
The lantern lit past peak and knoll
Remembers of its own this soul

Copyright Kkh 5/12/04

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2004-05-12 10:54 AM

very nicely done
enjoyed the read

Gloom

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2004-05-12 10:58 AM

and so be it...exquisite poetry

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-05-12 10:59 AM

yes indeed, very nicely done, easy read, but oh those emotions...wonderfully composed.

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

4 posted 2004-05-12 11:02 AM

Wow, beautiful poetry. Very much enjoyed.
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2004-05-12 12:44 PM

....incredible

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

6 posted 2004-05-12 03:55 PM

TD,
very, very good writing! Enjoyed it a lot
and understand the penny calculations!
Sadie

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-05-12 04:25 PM

As always Kathleen..beautifully crafted.
~Smiles & Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

LucidityNow
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 118
Canada

8 posted 2004-05-12 09:17 PM

How wide the ripple of a touch
Be hard or soft the fathom such
In monotone convections
Embrace of recollections

Well...after reading the poem 8 times, I think I'll read it again. How wide indeed, this touched me greatly.

and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me...

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