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MERCURY
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Ireland

0 posted 2004-05-12 08:44 AM


There’s such a chill rummaging through my lean body.

Each bone that I possess trembles in the dark,

As if someone is walking over my grave.

Time has no bearing, Nature non-caring.

The only god here is that of survival.

Slowly I edge towards safety.

My brain computes an uneasy calm,

But my walking frame seeks total respite.

Logic dictates if I rest I will fall.

Memories of youth inspire,

While evil forces around me conspire.

The snowstorm now is relentless.

Mercy is officially outlawed.

Naively I thought white was the colour of peace.

I feel tired …………………………….



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LeeJ
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1 posted 2004-05-12 09:11 AM


good one!
passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-05-12 12:42 PM


believe it or not, I understand
ecrivan
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my own state
3 posted 2004-05-12 08:58 PM


enjoyed the feel this one...


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4 posted 2004-05-12 09:02 PM


very good


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In Your Poetic Mind
5 posted 2004-05-12 10:49 PM


Naively I thought white was the colour of peace""


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in understanding of this.....

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le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
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