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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Nature’s Library Distinctive clarity tenderly arranging Anticipating eagerly, allegory of creation Flaming out like oozing slow hope Raking gravel, what images promote In the midst of great depth and integrity Allowing essentially, is the dialect savvy Fanning the surface going deep within info structures Oh the common place reveals immortal cantors Secured within a well thought-out world mystery Soft affirmation of things molding scenery Acting on its own….between the doer and reflective moments Middle earth of soul, dimensional sense of semblance Waking with the dawn of light suspended in patience Claimed by a oneness, serenity, yours and mine Multicolored intensity of unsaid motion aligned Believe the fire’s manifest beyond any question Choose the sight to which our hearts ocean It is the deepest design, bringing visitors to view Visual atoms, embroidered works…invisible pearls Herbal’s greater delight, enriching strangeness uncurls Small stories to be observed, like seeds developing Nature’s polite conversation, optimism knowing Moist flaming watercolors enhancing harmony The absolution and beauty of you and me [This message has been edited by LeeJ (05-13-2004 06:14 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
LeeJ I guess you could say that. LOL enjoyed |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the second last line was supposed to be enhancing harmony...dahhhhh....sorry |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I like "Impairing" better. Just kidding! Another great write Lee J. I hope you remember me when you become rich and famous as a poet/writer. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
every line has its own magic splendid write Lee |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Moist flaming watercolors impairing harmony The absolution and beauty of you and me" LeeJ -- "impairing" threw me for a minute until I read your post. I kind of like it to as I think maybe that is true for some people. Either way -- enjoyed immensely!  ........jo |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you still have time to edit it LeeJ that way you dont have to worry about the confusion "Visual atoms, embroidered works…invisible pearls" my fav line out of this very nice |
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