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Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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0 posted 2004-05-12 04:39 AM




I am a survivor and a fighter
I wonder if the pain will fade
I hear the darkness call my name
I see the devil at my door
I want freedom from my past
I am a survivor and a fighter

I pretend I am the choosen one
I feel lost in this world
I touch the darkness surrounding me
I worry that he will find me again
I cry over my lost innocense
I am a survivor and a fighter

I understand that fate is cruel
I say I shall survior
I dream of freedom from his grasp
I try to touch others who have been hurt
I hope to someday be free of the nightmares
I am a survivor and a fighter

This is the first new poem i've written in almost 6 months...i'm hoping with this new piece my writers block will leave....here's hoping

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-05-12 01:00 PM


it sometimes helps to read people's poetry

at least it does for me

hang in there, it comes back

Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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2 posted 2004-05-12 02:12 PM


thanks for the feed back
i've been working to revise all of my poetry so its been slow going

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GlisteningRain
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3 posted 2004-05-12 03:47 PM


Reading others poetry does help alot. It sparkingly sparks the energy ever endless mindful mind.

-B


Sadelite
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since 2003-10-11
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4 posted 2004-05-12 04:35 PM


"I try to touch others who have been hurt"
Sounds like a good plan to me!  Especially helps me when I do this in an area I'm not hurting.  Take care,
      Sadie

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