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MERCURY
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since 2003-04-16
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Ireland

0 posted 2004-05-12 04:33 AM



Save me from my fate,

For I have foreseen my end.

My body shivers with fear,

My final ride indicates a descend.

Memories gather and jostle for places,

A vain exercise though.

For only one thought is running on film,

Why did I pick up that hitch-hiking psycho?

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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23
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of Depression
1 posted 2004-05-12 08:03 AM


Save me from my fate,
But we’ve already set the date
For I have foreseen my end.
then you know the time to spend
My body shivers with fear,
it happens when the reaper’s near
My final ride indicates a descend.
there is no reason to pretend
Memories gather and jostle for places,
with a quick flash of old friends faces
A vain exercise though.
well the first time it went slow
For only one thought is running on film,
is it really him
Why did I pick up that hitch-hiking psycho?
t’is destiny you know


Gloom
hope you don't mind me filling in the lines

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-05-12 08:26 AM


MERCURY
Interesting write, enjoyed.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-05-12 12:52 PM


kinda spooky...
I never pick up hitch-hikers

passing shadows
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4 posted 2004-05-12 12:55 PM


well...there was that one time I picked a guy up and we talked about so much interesting stuff...I ended  up taking him all the way to New Orleans and we had coffee at an outdoor cafe on a street I can't remember now...but his name was Greg...

maybe it was Canal or Royal? anyhow...

a great experience.

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