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Open Poetry #32

Pizza Delivery Boy

Defective
Member

since 2003-09-19

Posts 73
Salisbury NC

0 posted 2004-05-12 02:55 AM

I made the mistake of calling you back
and I wish I had never picked up that phone
because now you're on your way over here
and I really should be alone.
I ate all my pineapple
and chugged down the coke
gave the dog the pepperoni
and I'm almost broke.
I need those extra breadsticks
like I need a hole in the head
but those carbs keep calling me
and I can't resist...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-05-12 03:08 AM

just diet the rest of the week, you'll be okay

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

2 posted 2004-05-12 07:02 AM

oh gosh...dont we all know...mmm..snack attack LOL

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

3 posted 2004-05-12 04:12 PM

Haahaa! Way too cool. Good one!
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

4 posted 2004-05-12 04:18 PM

defective,
Now who can we call if it isn't the pizza delivery boy? Salad Delivery? "Lettuce fill your every need?" Vegetable Delivery? "No questions asked..."
Cute poem! Sure got a smile out of this!
Sadie

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

5 posted 2004-05-12 05:06 PM

Good one Defective. I have one I think you will enjoy called Sweet Longings. I'll post.
Bon-Bon

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

6 posted 2004-05-13 11:05 PM

Funny, clever, original, and most enjoyable.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2004-05-13 11:51 PM

Kristen~
I'm confessing ... after reading this and Bonnie's 'Sweet Longings' ... I had an "I WANT A PIZZA" attack !!!

So, I ordered, paid and scoffed up nearly the whole darned thing~
(saved three slices for breakfast)

Delightful read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

8 posted 2004-05-14 01:41 AM

Very clever poem here!

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