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aujussy wolf
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0 posted 2004-05-12 12:40 PM



spring , the vital begins
with the dawning of the day
sunshine machines await there routines
on the green hills of mother earth

I have been lost many times
i found myself today
i awoke with an angels whisper in my ear
through the dreams , like nothing has ever changed
we are all age , time bottlers
a box full of light , in a dark space sky

Inversion can sneak up on you
like the dunes that will sculpt you
slowly with sand castle fantasy lands
and wisps of wind from the deserts of imagination


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James D Wolf III
5-12-04



© Copyright 2004 James D Wolf III - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2004-05-12 01:23 AM


So very true JW...
Pretty picture this.
TD

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2 posted 2004-05-12 03:11 AM


if you have any spare inversion, please send it sneaking my way
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3 posted 2004-05-12 03:12 AM


Enjoyed...James
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4 posted 2004-05-12 07:39 PM


yes..yes..this is nice... i never have complaints about you, you just write the way i like

never fail to please...i so enjoy your scenes.
take care wolfy

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5 posted 2004-05-12 08:12 PM


I like the feel of this.

Susan

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6 posted 2004-05-12 10:00 PM


thanks to all of your replys
its been a bit of time since i have last picked up the pen and paper maybe in a few i will write another , i have the urge
to unfold .

james

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7 posted 2004-05-12 10:24 PM


this has a magical touch to it....

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

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8 posted 2004-05-13 04:42 AM


yes please do pen another i enjoy your writes. very good


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9 posted 2004-05-13 10:04 PM


yes it flows off the pen -very nice
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