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Blending Memories
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Blending Memories |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Blending Memories Rivers flowing by trees, carrying golden rouged fallen leaves far, far out to sea... Memories a ‘float. Ships Captains disregarding as whim… Thoughts passing by as simple granules of sand… these particles of lives, lived in tales, and stories, or dreams … Insignificants blending in, one by one, yet known as legendary fame. Participants glowing a hidden smile, secretly coding within… Gathering up the wind, sailing off, shimmering in the setting sun. All collected there at rivers end, into the depths of the sea these leaves, lost and forgotten, In memories… |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
"Insignificants blending in, one by one, yet known as legendary fame. Participants glowing a hidden smile, secretly coding within… Gathering up the wind, sailing off, shimmering in the setting sun. All collected there at rivers end, into the depths of the sea these leaves, lost and forgotten, In memories…" JL -- you are one deep thinker and your mind twinkles here! Beautiful, beautiful!  .......jo |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Very nice. I like the feel of this. Susan |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I was swept away by the vivid, memorable images! A very enjoyable read! Thank you! EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this is quite beautiful |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 I liked, so soft and flowing, tender and profound. Ohhhhh, so lovely your mind and writes. Gets a body to thinkin bout all those magnificent secrets to life. The embryo of what is yet to come |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A lullaby for the mind here JL. As soft as a brush stroke. TD |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very beautiful..you used a very light touch here. Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Beautiful! I am in motion |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful flow of words. thanks |
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