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Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2004-05-11 09:43 AM

Wake early in the day to find you not here,
It's times like that when everything's so unclear.
Wait throughout the day,
Still nothing you say.
Moments like these make my mind wander,
And it slowly begins to ponder.
Weeks go by without a word,
Thoughts brewed in my mind slowly stirred.
Chain letter e-mail isn't talking,
Soon I may find myself walking.
Moments like these make me wonder if it'll last,
Or if this is just something for our past.
The agony creeps up behind me,
I wish you could see.
Moments like these tear me up inside,
Moments like these are why I choose to hide.

Can you hear my cries, can you hear my pleads, will you watch me burn...or would you bleed for me?

© Copyright 2004 Kyle - All Rights Reserved

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2004-05-11 09:59 AM

Oh, my! Where are your beautiful eyes?!?

Dear Hot Flake From Hades,
swish, swish, swish

Magic Wand

Begone, moments such as those!

~ May joy be your constant companion!

EA

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2004-05-11 10:33 AM

Hide not, never, ever! But be as you are...and never stop writing...this was powerfully done. Very profound.

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2004-05-11 10:36 AM

Sadly powerfull. I hope there aren't too many moments like those...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-05-12 02:39 AM

I do understand

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-05-12 08:42 AM

Powerful write here Kyle.
Much enjoyed the read...
But your eyes!! Please bring back the other pic..LOL.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2004-05-12 01:03 PM

You described it so well ..... I have momemts like these ... in fact had them quite a lot lately

Hope

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