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RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

0 posted 2004-05-11 08:41 AM

Likeness

A needful place,
low,
marshy
as requisite to the insatiable
water vapor. Fog forms. Not thick
but textured sufficiently to meet
the still air's lust for observance.
Rarely does collective inducement
result in such singular access
to beauty. Together
they gratify separately.

RMW

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

1 posted 2004-05-11 08:48 AM

Interesting write

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-05-11 08:54 AM

Foggy mists...
a safe place
to visit...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-05-11 08:56 AM

"Rarely does collective inducement
result in such singular access
to beauty. Together
they gratify separately"

How very true...
Much enjoyed the read Robert.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-05-11 09:24 AM

That marshy place of soul settles...how stillness glows light on fluttery anticipation...
sufficiently textured liked that line very much.
Well done.
TD

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

5 posted 2004-05-11 10:34 AM

Fog forms. Not thick
but textured sufficiently to meet
the still air's lust for observance.

Brilliant!

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2004-05-11 10:38 AM

A vision brought to life as the sense of touch gives it feeling....I liked this poem...

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

7 posted 2004-05-11 11:06 AM

Mercury - Thank you very much.

Sunshine - The deer like it. Smiling.

Enchantress - Thank you, Nancy.

TD - Thank you for taking a moment.

Lee J - You are much too kind.

Startime - I am glad that you liked it.

Bob

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2004-05-11 12:08 PM

"Together
they gratify separately."

~ Life is rife with paradox!

Good to read you again!

Linda

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2004-05-11 12:22 PM

stunning way with words

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