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you said forever |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada 
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the words flow like water out of your perfect mouth how can this be easy for you how can you act like it's no big deal my lungs feel like they're about to explode held breath held hand whats the difference you said forever you can't promise forever like you can't promise my heart won't break or my eyes won't tear you said forever forever is a long time to promise someone your heart when it only takes a second to break one. |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Exhale --  and understood so well. |
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LucidityNow Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 118Canada |
Such spite, such pain....such truth. Good work. and i'm certain that if i drive into those trees, it would make less of a mess, than she's made of me... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 understood |
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