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Elan
Member

since 2002-05-03

Posts 382
State of Wide Eye

0 posted 2004-05-10 04:31 PM

I have been remiss ~
You should have been able to
Hear words of windsong
But I forgot to whisper
I love you sweetheart, I do.

Sadelite
Member Elite

since 2003-10-11

Posts 2519

1 posted 2004-05-10 05:17 PM

I have been remiss ~
You should have been able to
Hear words of windsong
But I forgot to whisper
I love you sweetheart, I do.

I love this! How we often think others know the tune we're singing, but we've forgotten to whisper. Great...
Sadie

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

2 posted 2004-05-10 08:32 PM

Lovely -- let's say it more often. I like the feel of the words as they stream through my mind.

Susan

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

3 posted 2004-05-10 09:46 PM

This is a windsong!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2004-05-11 03:17 AM

this is gorgeous!

kayjay
Member Elite

since 2002-06-24

Posts 2015
Oregon

5 posted 2004-05-11 10:45 AM

Some say "I love you" is like a threat, demanding an equivalent response. I feel it is a sacred phrase. Well done. KJ

Through rubble and trouble and dark of night
The yawn of a dawn will hasten the light

Startime55
Member Elite

since 2003-04-05

Posts 2148
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2004-05-11 10:47 AM

No longer forgotten as the words flow from your pen...Very well said..

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2004-05-11 10:54 AM

Now I would be remiss if I had not seen this here today Elan!!
As they say...'windsong stays on his mind'

Lovely lovely....Hugs.

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

8 posted 2004-05-11 10:58 AM

Your whispered windsong would surely sing to the heart of the intended...

Beyond lovely.

EA

MovesInSilence
Member

since 2004-03-21

Posts 111
Perth, Australia

9 posted 2004-05-11 11:41 AM

Very nice

sweet

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

10 posted 2004-05-11 11:43 AM

very softly sweetly written...lovely

JL
Member Ascendant

since 2004-04-01

Posts 6128
Texas, USA

11 posted 2004-05-11 07:46 PM

Very much said in so few words. Great write!
JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”

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