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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2004-05-10 05:22 AM

There are more venomous things

than those that once were

and though

tasting the air never remedies

the once bitten twice shy...

You can't squeeze my lungs shut

they dont fit the coil

quite yet

so I will scream

until you let go.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

1 posted 2004-05-10 06:14 AM

You can't squeeze my lungs shut

they dont fit the coil

quite yet

so I will scream

until you let go.

This is a wowser Gem.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2004-05-10 07:41 AM

very powerful emotion today gemma

LucidityNow
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 118
Canada

3 posted 2004-05-10 08:08 AM

Yes I absolutely loved this one.

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

4 posted 2004-05-10 09:19 AM

Fantastic stuff Gemjop

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2004-05-10 09:24 AM

Very much enjoyed this write as I do all yours Gem.
Powerful write this is!
Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

6 posted 2004-05-10 12:03 PM

You know how to make others want to scream along with you...

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2004-05-10 12:43 PM

amazing...love reading you!

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

8 posted 2004-05-10 05:37 PM

Whew!

Taking the breath right out of me.

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2004-05-10 07:23 PM

There are more venomous things

than those that once were

and though

tasting the air never remedies

the once bitten twice shy...
=====================================

you aint neva lied girl....
kick butt writing Gem...keep em coming..love being able to read you again.

I love you more the further I go ...
before this existence ... you were always here inside of me.

Nelly Furtado

aujussy wolf

Senior Member

since 2003-08-09

Posts 1215
Michigan

10 posted 2004-05-10 07:27 PM

husky like a Siberian sled dog , beautiful edge and also a new craving, persistence and insight top this poem just right ........ , all power points in this write of yours , singing scales

wolfy

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2004-05-10 07:30 PM

Very, very interesting writing and talent for drawing in the reader here!

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