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brian sites
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since 2002-06-25
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0 posted 2004-05-10 12:06 PM



there are very few

    that have known
my fiercest hug

there are very few

    that have deserved it

amazing...
the muscles
       that unconditional love
gives you


amazing...
how that spreads
       to all the dark corners

filling even
the cracks in my concrete face
          with a spring gullywasher

my smile
grew like a weed

........thank you mom
I love you


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iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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1 posted 2004-05-10 12:09 PM


Brian, any mother would love this poem -- so real and so sweet!
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2004-05-10 01:15 AM


that strong bull viking love?

nod

she knows she gave good seed.

You are so beautiful.

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-05-10 02:46 AM


beautiful tribute
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2004-05-10 08:48 AM


This is beautiful Brian..absolutely.

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-05-10 08:55 AM


Oh my!  This is beautiful!!!
Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Sunshine
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6 posted 2004-05-10 10:17 AM


amazing...
how that spreads
       to all the dark corners

~*~

*smiling*

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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7 posted 2004-05-10 12:02 PM


Very nice.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

8 posted 2004-05-10 03:09 PM


filling even
the cracks in my concrete face
          with a spring gullywasher

my smile
grew like a weed

........thank you mom
I love you

absolutely beautiful

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