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0 posted 2004-05-09 05:09 PM



My First Kiss

Mom and Dad had smothered me
With kisses from the hour three
Their lips were warm and fill of bliss,
Indeed, these were granted “my first kiss”.

But “MY” first kiss came with such woo,
With blondish hair! This, my undo…
So silky, shiny, gads, my bliss
From love’s appeal was my first kiss

This bravery, facing danger,
This love kept me from all strangers;
This love was, granted, my implore
As we rolled upon our great floor…

And here, here, let the journal log
This greatest love, was my first dog…



She lives on, for in brown eyes I see
This love fulfilling harmony…




© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-09 05:12 PM


oh how precious!

thanks for sharing!

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2 posted 2004-05-09 05:40 PM


And mine, too, Karilea -- also my first kiss, come to think of it!  
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3 posted 2004-05-09 05:51 PM


Oh how precious!
Very much enjoyed..and love the pics Karilea.
Happy Mother's Day.
Love ya lady~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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4 posted 2004-05-09 10:41 PM


Karilea,
Of all the luck! But I'm not the jealous type. That pic is a classic. This was such fun.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

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5 posted 2004-05-09 11:23 PM


Karilea,
   What a cute poem!  Yes, those kisses I remember, too!  Very creative and neat photos!  Gorgeous dog and cute kid!
               Sadie

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6 posted 2004-05-10 03:08 AM


Enjoyed...James
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7 posted 2004-05-10 05:58 AM


This is sooooo lovely!
You kissy girl!
Love and hugs. Margherita

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8 posted 2004-05-10 09:42 AM


Ah! You tricked us! But it's okay, because it's a sweet surprise!




Corinne

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9 posted 2004-05-15 12:44 PM


oh this is toooo cute! gorgeous
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10 posted 2004-05-15 12:55 PM


The girls and I loved this one,

~Patricia~

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