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zenny
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since 2002-11-24
Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2004-05-09 02:48 PM



Eyes closed
fully concentrated
on
...
a feel

Slowly opening
smile meets smile
both existing
because
...
a feel

Each time again
amazed
of the aftermath
of
...
this feel


The simplest thing gives what one needs
Affection shared in strongest hold
Each time again it makes me see
A truly intended hug is worth all gold




The greatest thing u'll ever learn
is just to love
and be loved
in return

© Copyright 2004 Kelly Verbeeck - All Rights Reserved
iliana
Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
1 posted 2004-05-09 03:49 PM


zenny -- so true and here's one for you -- .....jo
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-05-09 05:17 PM


this is quite simple and short but very powerful
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