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pictureme
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0 posted 2004-05-09 03:35 AM


Living Mother's Day
*
(Dedicated to My Mother
  & My Children)
*
Its Mother's Day
In the Month Of May
2004
*
A child
counts her blessings
A mother
counts her blessings
A child
*
and I,
am blessed with
MORE!
*

© Copyright 2004 M. Freeman - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-05-09 04:05 AM


nice tribute
iliana
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2 posted 2004-05-09 04:54 AM


Yes!  And, me, too!   and Happy Mother's Day!
nakdthoughts
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3 posted 2004-05-09 09:01 AM


very sweet~~
Have a wonderful day
*s
M

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2004-05-09 09:03 AM


pictureme
Short and sweet, enjoyed.

Sunshine
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5 posted 2004-05-09 09:06 AM


Oh, I like this!
Thank you!

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6 posted 2004-05-09 10:45 PM


pictureme,
Yup! This is done well. Just lovely.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

pictureme
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7 posted 2004-05-10 11:34 PM


thanks everyone for you kind words which every last one of them reminds me of my mother and children! :-)
pictureme

GG
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8 posted 2004-05-11 12:00 PM


I'm late to this...
but I just found it,
and love it
I hope your mother's day was great!

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
                  Joyce kilmer

ice
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9 posted 2004-05-11 06:40 AM


Excellent, clever use of words to propel the meaning of the theme...
enjoyed
-------ice
  ><>

MERCURY
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10 posted 2004-05-11 06:44 AM


Sweet


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