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Martie
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0 posted 2004-05-08 11:35 AM




Beauty

There is beauty
in every face
a twinkle
a glow
arch of lid
breath of flower

and to trace
line and form
is no miracle to
sleight of hand
but the heart light
that grows and cascades
from within

Marian
      

She left her mark within my cheekbones
as sure as summer her shape is mine
I even think within the lining
of my heart she left her sign

The shaded place of back yard peace
like open book is where she stays
sometimes she is in the humming
of mourning dove upon her grave

I see the skirt of many colors
circle round her sun tanned legs
I see her reach across the chasm
place four leaf clovers on the page

So fragile is the lip of time
that death has left upon my heart
in the evening dwells the perfumed
evening breeze her fragrance’s part

Gather round her all the wild flowers
oceans place her in their fold
captured are the star night feathers
that fall upon her heavenly stroll

I see her in my mirror smiling
she shades her eyes within my own
and in the sand of summer’s footprints
she is not walking all alone

________
Reposted ....In memory of my mother
© Copyright 2004 Martie Odell Ingebretsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-05-08 11:41 AM


I had hoped you would...
and I am glad you did...
your mother lives on, in
your love, and in your flowers...

and especially
in your words...

Love you, Sis...

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2 posted 2004-05-08 12:24 PM


MartieSis~
Classically classical~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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3 posted 2004-05-08 02:48 PM


yes...thank you for reminding
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4 posted 2004-05-08 04:29 PM


A most beautiful tribute, Martie!
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5 posted 2004-05-08 04:37 PM


"She left her mark within my cheekbones
as sure as summer her shape is mine"

A legacy you should be proud of lovely lady.

Happy Mother's Day Martie.


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6 posted 2004-05-08 04:43 PM


A beautiful tribute Martie....

Happy Mothers Day!



Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea changes colours, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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7 posted 2004-05-08 04:53 PM


A beautiful tribute to your mother Martie.
She does indeed live on in you....
Now I really really miss my mom.
~Heart Hugs~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

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8 posted 2004-05-08 09:53 PM


beautiful...the poem and the photo that goes with it.....you touched my heart with this
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9 posted 2004-05-09 03:33 AM


Martie,
I am glad you reposted....as this is
my first time read. A wonderful tribute
and definately worth a reread and reread.
Very nicely said!
pictureme :-)

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10 posted 2004-05-09 04:52 AM


Martie -- I am filled with sweet tears over this very, very lovely memorial for your mother.  Thank you for sharing.  
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11 posted 2004-05-09 09:09 AM


I do see you in her....in the lovely picture (both of them), and in every line you've written here.

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12 posted 2004-05-09 09:15 AM


Martie
You write beauty so floorlessly.

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13 posted 2004-05-09 09:47 AM


"She left her mark within my cheekbones
as sure as summer her shape is mine
I even think within the lining
of my heart she left her sign"

"I see her in my mirror smiling
she shades her eyes within my own
and in the sand of summer’s footprints
she is not walking all alone"

Martie, the beauty in these sentiments is simply stunning. I could visualize you looking into a mirror and seeing your mother's reflection smiling back toward you. You have penned delicate lines of heartfelt beauty and love. Such a wonderful read.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

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14 posted 2004-05-10 11:19 AM


very special tribute Martie - Paul
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15 posted 2004-05-10 12:45 PM


I'm glad you reposted this Martie...exceptionally riviting grasp this has...wonderful write...very much enjoyed
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16 posted 2004-05-11 02:22 PM


As always Martie, you leave me in awe. Simply beautiful.  So glad to find you still here.
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17 posted 2004-05-11 02:26 PM


"She left her mark within my cheekbones
as sure as summer her shape is mine
I even think within the lining
of my heart she left her sign"

I had not read this before and it is beautiful in sentiment and also displays the continued pure beauty of your heart Martie.  You do indeed look like your mother, and I unfortunatey also look like mine Hope you had a great Mother's Day.

Today I'm only moving clouds, tomorrow I'll try mountains.

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18 posted 2004-05-11 02:36 PM


Martie, it is as tho' you are looking out at us from long ago... The resemblance with your Mom is uncanny.

You also have her spirited sparkle!

The depth of love in your words really moved me. A beautiful poem from, and for, a beautiful soul.

Loving hugs,
Linda

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19 posted 2004-05-11 03:32 PM


Such a beautiful, moving tribute. *S* I'm glad I didn't miss this. *S*
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20 posted 2004-05-11 03:34 PM


Excellent write!  Really enjoyed the read.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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