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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-05-08 07:11 AM


Step Softly

Step softly in the mist of morn
Where most your fantasies are born
Tip toe through the waking green
Become as one with the scene

See the world through dew drop curl
Let your mind and faith unfurl
Fly the magic carpets leap
Guide it through a dreamer’s sweep

Touch the essence of the pale
Set the sheets and up the sail
Let yourself into the room
Of the phantom of your bloom

Be the spirit of the dawn
Washed with dew of early morn
And when the ghost of that is done
Walk you proud into the sun

Each day for you will be a coup
Each day will be a world of new.

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1 posted 2004-05-08 07:19 AM


very whimsical...has my heart dancing...lovely lovely
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2 posted 2004-05-08 07:43 AM


Be the spirit of the dawn
Washed with dew of early morn
And when the ghost of that is done
Walk you proud into the sun

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and that verse I will take with me today as I head for the river and the woods.
Me and Randy are going hiking.
You shine on the day with your poetic rays....
Good Morning me sweet Sy-guy.


*ww*

I love you more the further I go ...
before this existence ... you were always here inside of me.

Nelly Furtado


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3 posted 2004-05-08 07:53 AM


Now, THIS is the way I want to start my Saturday!  
Thank you, Sy!

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4 posted 2004-05-08 08:03 AM


A very good way to start the day...fine write Sey thank you....

May i draw your attention to my dday post on annoucement and links....i am sure you could write something.....

Goldenrose.

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My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

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5 posted 2004-05-08 09:05 AM


Most uplifting write Sy.  Very much enjoyed.

believe in what your heart feels...

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6 posted 2004-05-08 09:11 AM


Oh Sy!  How very beautiful!  
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7 posted 2004-05-08 09:17 AM


How lovely light and lyrical Sy!
You made my heart dance.
Have a wonderful weekend.
~Morning hugs & special tea, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 2004-05-08 09:40 AM




Lovely, lovely poetry

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2004-05-08 10:05 AM


muted
Thank you for the lovely.

JM,
Good morning sweet, have a wonderful picture
taking day. Your pictures are like poetry.
Will write soon. WWRS

Sunshine
You will always be my sunshine.

Goldenrose
Thank you for the lovely reply.

scorpio
So glad you enjoyed.

Martie
Bless you my dear.

Nancy,
Hugs and kisses.

Elizabeth,
Lovely is as lovely says.

ThisDiamond
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10 posted 2004-05-08 10:38 AM


The inspiration you gift is so very welcome in my thoughts Sy.  Thanks...very lovely.
TD

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11 posted 2004-05-08 10:50 AM


Seymour~
You word-walk my morning with such beauty~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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12 posted 2004-05-08 10:53 AM


Be the spirit of the dawn
Washed with dew of early morn
And when the ghost of that is done
Walk you proud into the sun

Each day for you will be a coup
Each day will be a world of new.


Sounds really good, Seymour.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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13 posted 2004-05-08 01:52 PM


nice...gives me a bit of hope
Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2004-05-08 02:09 PM


TD,
Glad I could help.

Marge,


Ethel,
Thank you dear, hugs back.

passing,
There is always hope.

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15 posted 2004-05-08 02:26 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2004-05-08 03:29 PM


Ericc
Thanks for the beautiful.

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