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Door Way To Happiness
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Door Way To Happiness |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States 
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I'm not sure what style of poetry this. While reading in the workshop forum I saw this form and decided to try it. Doorway To Happiness By Paul Wilson In this lonely place where I dwell No stories of joy do I tell Darkness surrounds me day and night This place on earth a living hell Maybe one day I’ll see the light My sadness will fade out of sight Happiness will then fill my heart Everything will then be all right Searching for the place I must start I look inside my saddened heart I journey back to time before From this sadness I must depart On my journey I see a door That takes me to forevermore The room begins to spin around With eyes closed I fall to the floor From behind the door comes a sound Quickly my heart begins to pound Wondering what could this sound be I ask while lying on the ground As I stand up I now can see It’s just a reflection of me Smiling at who I use to be Smiling at who I use to be |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah Paul this is wonderful.. Although I do not know the name of this form I'm sure others do and will agree on just how beautiful it is. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paul~ Totally B E A U T I F U L ! *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Kool, my friend. jwesley |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
not sure what style it is either, but I know I love the rhyme scheme! and the theme is awesome! |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
A nice poem with deep meaning. The good thing about reflections is that they are You. Best wishes! Jon |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Nancy...Thanks for the kind reply. Glad you liked it.Robert Frost wrote one in this style. Liz Santos asked workshop members to write one like this last month and I really like the style it is in...Paul Marge...I really appreciate you taking time to read and reply. Glad you liked it...Paul jwesley...I appreciate you taking time to read and reply my friend...Paul passing shadows...I like the rhyme scheme to. Thanks for reading and replying...Paul jonmcm...You are right, it does have very deep meanings, about someone changing and becoming a better person and reflecting back on the person they once were and what they have become.Thanks for reading...Paul To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you...Paul |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Simply beautiful. Way to go paul. JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
JL...Thanks my friend, Glad you enjoyed it...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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