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The Melt Of Me
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The Melt Of Me |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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The Melt of Me ~*Marge Tindal*~ With just your touch I become undone Surrendering time after time There is fire in your kiss your wandering fingertips And before I know it you are once again responsible for the melt of me~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Marge...Enjoyed. Very tender words. Thanks for sharing...Paul |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautifully romantic Marge...lovely. Hugs~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well done, my friend! Lovely. jwesley |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
This is really something, Marge...I am impressed! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
oh honey this sizzles...subtley, gracefully, but it still *hot*  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis I can't think of a better kind of heat for melting.  |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Warm and wonderful! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
pretty romantic! |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
This is lovingly HOT! |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
I really like this Marge. Love ya, Betty |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Wonderful! TD |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thank you, one and all, for letting me share my heart-writes with you~  *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sadelite Member Elite
since 2003-10-11
Posts 2519 |
Marge, You are responsible for the melt of me! Your graceful poems always send me to a different time and evoke memories. Very nicely done. Sadie |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...!!! Eric |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Ooooolala! How fabulous is this....  Thanks for the melt this afternoon!! Hugs and luvs and a Very Happy, Happy Mothers Day. Give luvs to your daughter-in-law and kisses to the girls. Marti If you truly love Nature, you will find |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
Marge, what you do to me.....for shame! Do it again? Please? |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I really like this -- the melt of me. Nice. Susan |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
It is a wonderful thing to be melted! Great poem, Marge! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ah, totally centered in love, just as this poem and just as your signature reads. Another lovely one, lady! Hugs! Corinne |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Beautiful Marge! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
(my computer is acting up.....but I doubly enjoyed this write, Marge!) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Loved this one, as always, dear lady...~S~ Music washes away from the soul the dust of everyday life |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
He sounds like he is made of hot stuff! Melt away! lol To love and more love! EO |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
This a nice one...short and to the point. Why mess around....just say it! |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Absolutely stunning Marge. Take care..........Sue I am in motion |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely and romantic...know this feeling for there is one that melts me...James |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge, You know I had to find you latest post immediately upon my return! And what a post! Oh, how I have missed you! I will be seeing you a lot now, though! ***Huggers*** ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
YES! *S* And once such melt is experienced, we're never quite the same... thank heavens! *S* Beautiful work, my friend! *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Excellent write! Like this one a lot! JL  She said: ”You look cute in the dark.” |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
beautiful as your heart, thanks for sharing |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ah I remember melting...long ago...wonder what happened? *shakes her head*...maybe that needs fixing.......*smile* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
My goodness~ Such a simple little penning from the heart to garner so many lovely replies ... I sincerely appreciate each one of you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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choshi Senior Member
since 2004-01-01
Posts 1184New York |
Such passion in the unraveling; in the unity of melting...Oh yes ~P |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Marge, these few lines hold magic. We all have this desire to melt and you shared this moment masterfully .... Love and hugs. Margherita |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hiya Margie and good morning...lovely words which describe a loving heart and soul. Thank you for sharing. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Such graciousness from such respected poets, thank you all from the heart of my little bottom~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Yep, when you're in love and being loved, you melt and I must say, you melted beautifully my dear friend. Say hello to the one who's causing you to melt and tell him I haven't seen a proper elephant here yet  Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Hey Marge, sounds like you have the lover of your life within your grasps... good for you and enjoyed! |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Tender, beautiful, and simply stated. Wonderful work. ~*Krista Lee Knutson*~ |
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akforty7 Junior Member
since 2004-01-10
Posts 18 |
gentle, beautiful and thought provoking... nice write! |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
very touching. liked this |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderfully expressed... regards sudhir |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You are all just the best of the best~ Thank you so very much for treating this one so tenderly~ It is my heart~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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