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Destinys_Fallen_Angel
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0 posted 2004-05-07 07:41 PM



I am a poet writing the truths of life
I am a sister scared for your future
I am a teacher watching you grow
I am a realist looking at the horrors in the world
I am a friend who is worried about you
I am a daughter who cares for you
I am a rape victim who feels others pain
I am a survivor who is standing strong
I know who I am and what I want.
I want a normal life, a life with out always fearing for my life, with out fearing the darkness. I want to be able to trust, to love, to know its ok.
I want to write, I want to sing, I want to fly. I want to follow my dreams.

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2004-05-07 07:47 PM


And you will...James
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-05-07 07:47 PM


Powerful write!  Excellent!

This

"I am a survivor who is standing strong
I know who I am and what I want."

and then this

I want to write, I want to sing, I want to fly. I want to follow my dreams."

Beautiful...absolutely beautiful!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~


~ Trace my body with your words,
  in doing so, you touch my heart ~

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
3 posted 2004-05-07 07:50 PM


You know what you want and ... you sing.
Beautifully so.
Love, Margherita

True North
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since 2004-05-03
Posts 23

4 posted 2004-05-07 08:47 PM


that was very thoughtful and collective,

  i do feel respection for ambisious persons...  hope you will hang on to your dreams and find what you are looking for.  

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
5 posted 2004-05-09 01:47 AM


I really like this one.
It says a lot of things.
Great write

:-)

passing shadows
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displaced
6 posted 2004-05-09 02:14 AM


very reflective
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
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7 posted 2004-05-09 05:03 AM


Affirmations are very powerful.  You're on the good road -- stick with it -- I'll be following.  
vandana
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8 posted 2004-05-09 08:16 AM


enjoyed this
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
9 posted 2004-05-09 08:35 AM


nicely written...

As time goes on, I realize though that there is nothing today that is "normal".

M

Fariegirl
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since 2003-02-05
Posts 147

10 posted 2004-05-09 09:02 AM


Very good, enjoyed. Keep on going with this kind of poetry!

~*Faries exist.*~

sweet_cute_palestinian04
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Earth
11 posted 2004-05-09 12:47 PM


this is amazing....i love it keeep postin,,im going to save it lolol...keep it upp

A Friend's love says:
" If you ever need anything,
I'll be there."

True Love says:
" You'll never need anything;
I'll be here."

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