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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
My shade is shivering leaves that breathe sunlight As I lay here I grieve despite such beauty Like a flower still sleeping as a bud feeding on droplets that drizzle pain delicate like a boy who knows nothing gripping sand at a playground with a girl like an angel sprinkling magic dust in his eyes which dazzle him magical as one who hears a psychic melody pulling on their soul and heart strings filling their mind with ecstasy till... their eyes close in blissfulness. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Welcome to Passions!! You use some very visual adjectives...and I like that. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 WELCOME TO PASSIONS BYRON! Such a beautiful and magical entrance post! I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Trace my body with your words, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Byron~ Welcome to the friendliest poetic circle on the Internet~ Enjoyed your entry poem. Interestingly enough, couldn't help but notice your name ... just had a new granddaughter born in March ... and my son and his wife named her Landry Leigh Tindal~ So it's nice to meet you Byron Landry, Jr.~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, the spirit rejoices over what it has left. - Sufi epigram <))>< noles1@totcon.com |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
Thank you everyone. You can call me B. I prefer that anyway. *returns hugs sincerely* I love to share my poetry. It gives imagery to my emotion. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome B. And thank you for a touch of magic. Love, Margherita |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Magical. Welcome to Passions!  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Welcome to passions...a very good write..a good start..thank you.... Goldenrose. ''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies. |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 this is a delightful magical little poem. so nice to have you here, hope to see more soon (check your email for a special PIP greeting) |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome Your write elipses the mind in its gentility. Looking forward to sharing blue with you. TD |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
gripping sand at a playground with a girl like an angel sprinkling magic dust in his eyes which dazzle him magical sooooo good  this is in my library , like now lol , sweet first poem ....WELCOME TO PIP -wolfy |
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GlisteningRain Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 103The clouds |
Everyone here is so nice. I feel all warm and fuzzy. |
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