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PKreturns
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0 posted 2004-05-07 08:29 AM


I want to be the wind
That comes to you across the plains
To be the ocean boundless
As I swallow all of your rain

Arms outstretched
My head back, I look to the sky
Let that rain fall on my face
To drown what I feel inside

I am to be the youth in you
Feel me, I am all that you desire
If life is but a short journey
Then for now, I will be your inner fire



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-05-07 09:05 AM


I am to be the youth in you
Feel me, I am all that you desire
If life is but a short journey
Then for now, I will be your inner fire

~*~

What a wonderful thought!
As we age, there is still
that sense of youthful fire
in us...I know...I see it often
in Sy's writing as well.

Good job, PK - very good!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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2 posted 2004-05-07 09:43 AM


beg the blowing wind, the sea and sky to give
The precious moments passed that I may now relive
The love that I once tossed into the willful breeze
And reappears in prayer upon these bended knees

Whewwww, what intreging thoughts...powerfully articulated!  Very much enjoyed...have a wonderful day and weekend ahead

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-05-07 12:09 PM


beautiful
PKreturns
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4 posted 2004-05-07 01:18 PM


Thanks all.....
ThisDiamond
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5 posted 2004-05-07 05:28 PM


Oh...I took a different road on this, pleasant and wonderful write...
Drink of all life offers until you are quenched.  Such pleasure and delight is all of youth held in the soul!  Awesome!
TD

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