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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2004-05-07 07:14 AM


Scenes of Green

I walk among the scenes of green
Where mind displays an ID of screen
And spirit lays a web of lace
To grace the edges of my space

Where grow the flowers of my dreams
And sew the hours peaceful seems
To make the wile an Eden’s den
By all the wonders given men

The passage passes through the night
Into a garden of delight
Where fireflies become my stars
And fantasy becomes bizarre

Where borealis lights the sky
And wonderland takes the eye
Where weightless is the cares appeal
And ecstasy the soul reveal

Just take a dewdrop born of morn
And see through it the awe of dawn


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Janet Marie
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1 posted 2004-05-07 07:26 AM


And spirit lays a web of lace
To grace the edges of my space

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You grace all our space with your poetic lace and your gentle spirit.


*ww*


Randy wanted to send you a postcard and ask can he stay for the summer. Me thinks hes just trying to get out of helping you cut the grass. LOL




Sunshine
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2 posted 2004-05-07 08:35 AM


Just take a dewdrop born of morn
And see through it the awe of dawn

~*~

And there you have it...
a splash of magic.


scorpio
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3 posted 2004-05-07 08:36 AM


Sounds like a fantastic place Sy.  Good morning

believe in what your heart feels...

Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-05-07 09:21 AM


Awesome write this ayem Sy!
Have a great weekend.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~ Trace my body with your words,
in doing so, you touch my heart ~

LeeJ
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5 posted 2004-05-07 09:25 AM


Where grow the flowers of my dreams
And sew the hours peaceful seems
To make the wile an Eden’s den
By all the wonders given men

your imagination is a romping station to paradise...lovely images sir Sy

Good good morning, wishing you and Randy a wonderful day!

Goldenrose
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6 posted 2004-05-07 09:34 AM


Very nice write here sey..enjoyed reading..thanks..

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''-  Dalai Lama

passing shadows
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7 posted 2004-05-07 12:11 PM


beautiful
Margherita
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8 posted 2004-05-07 07:09 PM


quote:
Where borealis lights the sky
And wonderland takes the eye
Where weightless is the cares appeal
And ecstasy the soul reveal

Just take a dewdrop born of morn
And see through it the awe of dawn



The awe of dawn ... you captured it.
Beautiful, dear Seymour.
Love, Margherita

garysgirl
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9 posted 2004-05-08 10:51 AM


Sounds like a good place to walk, Seymour.  
Have a good day.
Hugs  
Ethel

Sadelite
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10 posted 2004-05-08 10:58 AM


Sy,
  What a way to begin the day!  I always look forward to dropping by for a lovely read.  Have a good weekend.
              Sadie

"Where borealis lights the sky
And wonderland takes the eye"

Dark Angel
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11 posted 2004-05-08 05:07 PM


Just take a dewdrop born of morn
And see through it the awe of dawn


Verryyy enchanting Seymour...fantastic!

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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