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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2004-05-07 12:39 PM


Chinese Food

When I saw her
all I could
say was wow.
Well, I could
have said more
but I was late
for work already,
so I couldn't
follow her through
the mall and
make a fool
out of my self
that day.
But there's always
next weekend,
and I know
the mall she
hangs out in,
and next weekend
is my weekend
to mess around
and eat
Chinese food.

JamesLee
May07
2004

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swatcatpettus
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1 posted 2004-05-07 12:42 PM


thats tight man, i know x-actly what u r talkin about, theres always that one girl...
passing shadows
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2 posted 2004-05-07 02:51 AM


*keeping fingers crossed*
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3 posted 2004-05-07 03:52 AM


i always enjoy your poetry...
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