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swatcatpettus
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since 2004-04-12
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0 posted 2004-05-06 05:55 PM



An adrenaline injection,
Powers our rage,
The 5th and 1st need be pleaded
It’s a shame
Our country that is,
Its hypocrisy is making my head spin,
It’s hard enough to live under the rule of a cretin,
But it’s even harder to do so at the expense of lives
I’m not saying that a democracy is such a bad thing
But to abuse our power is so upsetting
So I would like to send this message far and wide
It’s you and us who make the change in all of our lives
We need to stand strong, we need to stand tall,
And above all, we must not fall

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GlisteningRain
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since 2004-05-06
Posts 103
The clouds
1 posted 2004-05-06 10:06 PM


Stand tall and shake the heavens. (took that from a videogame but it works.) I agree with you in some ways.
swatcatpettus
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since 2004-04-12
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2 posted 2004-05-07 12:39 PM


what game might i ask? im a fellow gamer myself.
blackandwhitehorizon
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since 2003-05-05
Posts 183
an akward state of mind
3 posted 2004-05-11 05:26 PM


So I would like to send this message far and wide
It’s you and us who make the change in all of our lives
We need to stand strong, we need to stand tall,
And above all, we must not fall

....great lines

Just curious.. have you ever heard of the band Bad Religion?

"love is but a song we sing and fear's the way we die"

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