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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2004-05-06 03:04 PM

These days of warm winds, seltzer ‘neath the cork
Hunger just to taste, finger foods without a fork
My eyes gleam full of all this on my mind
Spontaneous and gratifying craves defined
The blanket spread among both fact and fiction
Bluff bent trees discord a sheltered contradiction
All around a gathering of what I’ve waited for
Dabbling of all the colors that could ever pour
Anticipation stirs its effervescent drink
Kicking off my shoes, freely in the pink
Deviled up or sandwiched a feast by all accounts
Tempting just desserts in wicked good amounts
Then full in the content of candy apple shine
Spread out among the grass such fun by the design

Copyright Kkh 5/6/04

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2004-05-06 03:21 PM

I love picnics... have a wonderful basket ...just waiting for the right person to come along and share it and all it's contents.

nicely writ
~smiling~
M

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

2 posted 2004-05-06 03:29 PM

And isn't this just the perfect day for one Kathleen?
Lovely this...lovely you!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-05-07 07:26 PM

Ahh yes, kicking off the shoes for the first time in Spring, touching the grass and feel Mother Earth ...
Very lovely.
Love, Margherita

True North
Junior Member

since 2004-05-03

Posts 23

4 posted 2004-05-07 08:05 PM

this was very genuine and natural...

thank you kathleen for sharing your picnic with us.

waiting for more..

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2004-05-07 10:50 PM

Ah, yes....I wanna be there now!

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-05-08 06:22 AM

I will have to plan one for myself soon!

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

7 posted 2004-05-08 06:30 AM

Very nice writing..enjoyed reading....

May i draw your attention to my dday post in annoucements and links....

Thank you for the fine poem...

Goldenrose.

''There is no need for temples, no need for complicated Philosophies.
My brain and my heart are my temples; my philosophy is kindness''- Dalai Lama

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

8 posted 2004-05-08 08:39 AM

This is more than a picnic...
it speaks of fairs and carnivals,
freedom and peace...
a right to live...

a blessing given to all of us...

what a great poem!

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2004-05-08 02:39 PM

Great write!

Eric

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2004-05-08 02:44 PM

Beautiful, Kathleen. Not only did I see a pretty
picture, I almost could taste the food. LOL

Love isn't blind, it just only sees what matters.
Ethel's Love Poetry
Heart Hugs, Ethel

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

11 posted 2004-05-08 05:17 PM

Oh I do enjoy picnics, and I enjoyed this too.

Lovely TD

Maree

The clouds never expect it when it rains, but the sea, changes colours, but the sea, does not change.
~Stevie Nicks~

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