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Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

0 posted 2004-05-06 12:10 PM

She put finger to my protesting lips
And bid me quiet with her smile
Then drew on dry earth a circle
she filled with herself
So that the shimmer of light
Across the surface of skin
Danced against the corners of my eyes
An illusion till I looked straight in
Then bloomed colors of grey against the blue
unless I moved

   Then it was of brown and green

She rose in slow
    Bent legs unfolded
As I watched the grace of move
And lost those things but moments ago
I saw reflected in her soul

Hungry this the flesh
To hold such treasured gem
I found myself in drench
As hands passed through
The parted hems of light and warmed
By all within leaving  me in a drown of wish
Knew I could not own

Again her finger found my face
And traced a line to chin
With laugh and simply blousing sway of skirt
She danced a step away
To fold her legs and settle down
In circle she had drawn

A puddled bit of rippled silk
Refractions of a dream

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2004-05-06 12:16 PM

you write well of your experiences with people...

I wish I could do that

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2004-05-06 12:20 PM

She put finger to my protesting lips
And bid me quiet with her smile
Then drew on dry earth a circle
she filled with herself
So that the shimmer of light
Across the surface of skin
Danced against the corners of my eyes
An illusion till I looked straight in
Then bloomed colors of grey against the blue
unless I moved

   Then it was of brown and green

She rose in slow
    Bent legs unfolded
As I watched the grace of move
And lost those things but moments ago
I saw reflected in her soul
================================

Have mercy boyyyeeeeeeeeee

PUDDLES???!!!!!
Yeah... huge mothy ones... lmao

yeah... you play fair... not!!!!

adding this puddle to me library of you!!

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2004-05-06 12:21 PM

What a beautiful tease!

I want some of that fabric.

"cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind"
~Sarah McLachlan~

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2004-05-06 12:25 PM

Again her finger found my face
And traced a line to chin
With laugh and simply blousing sway of skirt
She danced a step away
To fold her legs and settle down
In circle she had drawn

A puddled bit of rippled silk
Refractions of a dream

Oh my, oh my, Capt. Ron. You do write romance
so well. And anything else that you
decide to write, too.

Hugs,
Ethel

muted

Member Elite

since 2004-01-15

Posts 2949
Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

5 posted 2004-05-06 01:05 PM

just gorgeous!!

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

6 posted 2004-05-06 01:11 PM

Captain..this is one huge *SIGH*

Love it..love it...love every last word, syllable and letter.

~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2004-05-06 01:30 PM

Then drew on dry earth a circle
she filled with herself
So that the shimmer of light
Across the surface of skin
Danced against the corners of my eyes
An illusion till I looked straight in
Then bloomed colors of grey against the blue
unless I moved

~*~

Don't move...
just stand still...

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

8 posted 2004-05-06 01:50 PM

I'm always hoping these tales are real, Ron.

Very sweetly written.

Hugs,

Corinne

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

9 posted 2004-05-06 02:47 PM

magical..

..your words tempt rain beautifully...

~~**~~
le vent chante avec le calme doux
calme de nuit
sien beauté sur mes lèvres
~~**~~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

10 posted 2004-05-06 04:45 PM

Again her finger found my face
And traced a line to chin
With laugh and simply blousing sway of skirt
She danced a step away
To fold her legs and settle down
In circle she had drawn

With laugh and simply blousing sway of skirt

Just.. WOW!

Maree

another keeper

What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god
What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin.

Go Alanis!

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

11 posted 2004-05-06 05:39 PM

Oh, Cpat, this was wonderful!

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

12 posted 2004-05-06 06:51 PM

Ron...so soft and sensually appealing!

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

13 posted 2004-05-06 07:29 PM

Your words make this all come alive in my mind. Yu paint pictures with words...and create experiences by describing moments. Wonderful and very much enjoyed. Wow Ron!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

14 posted 2004-05-06 09:53 PM

This is a style that I could never write. The imagery and words seemed to be like the fabric of silk previously mentioned. Well written.

EvocativeVerse2
Senior Member

since 2003-09-10

Posts 1279

15 posted 2004-05-06 09:55 PM

Hey Cpat! Damn good! No other words could say more! Bravo my friend!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

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