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a long enough road to find it
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a long enough road to find it |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298
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stuck way down deep thoroughly permeated into every crook and cranny lest it be dislodged there lives a cry the ill intents of this morning sent her to go and find it she puts her search in gear and maneuvering around the hurts that anger had buried and past the pains that live only temporary she found her way to those that permanently reside their bony remains sharp and constant reminders of the cry they hide they beckon and moan in voices that no amount of wishing will forget at the point that the wails loom closer and closer threatening to close the road she knows that just around the corner is a break down she cuts the search short [This message has been edited by jellybeans (05-07-2004 03:35 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dreams yank you back just like that... a good write, JB... very good.  |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
well that and arriving at the end of my commute and having to put on a work face...sigh..... thank you lady |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
the struggle and the pain are obvious.the strength as well my friend.. the work face at times becomes the only face... |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you my friend, and though we might think the work face the only one, we still have inside the face of a friend...and your understanding this day brings warm tears for some reason ...thank you |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
 please know i gently hold you in my heart...and wish that the pain would quicken its pace as to pass...but we know wishing doesnt always work. take good care of yourself |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you lady, your kindness helps...I read your poem to your son, but was not able to reply...this holiday hurts more than I have words to say |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Hold on for the whole ride, Jelly -- know it is not easy and my heart goes out to you.  .......jo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh...you hit home with this, as you know my work face is smiling constantly...God it's hard! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JellyGirl~ All I have are *hugs* and prayers~ Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Hi jellybeans. What a piece. So full of raw emotion. This is what makes it worth the read. For a moment to be one with such pain...so sad. I feel for you dear friend. Healing takes a life time...but I'm here when you need a shoulder to lean on. Huge hugs! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Hi JB..very much enjoyed the read today... Hope you are well...and healing. ~Heart Hugs~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
they beckon and moan in voices that no amount of wishing will forget How painful and powerful are your words... I wish I could make things easier for you, my friend. |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
thank you all so much, we have been fighting that Sasser virus and have been thankful for the busyiness...if I sit still I cry...this week has been rough.......don't know what I would do without you...my poetic extended family......thankyou...with all my heart... suthern...gotta add a ditto...and a sigh |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
So powerful... wish things could be easier  I know this weekend must be a hard one for you so I just want to offer and prayers... hang on, okay?Always, Alyssa He was a man of sorrows |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Another good one JB...I like |
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