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Loves Gyro
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Loves Gyro |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Loves Gyro The gyro of my love it seem Spins upon a thread of theme Throwing echoes fireflies A sea of stars that light the skies. Eternal with forever’s ores External with its set of stores Setting all to starts begin On the fires of a sin At least it seems that way to me From lover to celibacy I walked a douser’s fate to find The secret path to sate my mind But I am ground to miller wheat Within a time and changing beat The winds undress me flake by flake Within the process of the make Douser, douser point my sane Before the coming of my Bane, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The gyro of my love it seem Spins upon a thread of theme Throwing echoes fireflies A sea of stars that light the skies. ==================================== But I am ground to miller wheat Within a time and changing beat The winds undress me flake by flake Within the process of the make ================================== I do so love the way your mind works poetically... you never cease to bring a smile to my face with your couplets of cool. Each day you consistantly play with the words and turn rhyme into spun gold. The winds undress me flake by flake Within the process of the make see what I mean?   *ww*    |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nice rhymes makes for nice reads  regards, sudhir |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
The gyro of my love it seem Spins upon a thread of theme Throwing echoes fireflies A sea of stars that light the skies. Absolutely beautiful writing, Seymour. Hugs  Ethel |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Now were you talking a walk in my neck of the woods, Sy? For dowsing and miller's wheat will bring you to my Kansa feet...  Good morning..and thank you! |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
I like the blend of images in this poem Sy. Well done. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely penned Sy! I enjoyed this morning's read so much. ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
moving as you ever be, you seem to have a tender key, once that touches all who read, to keep with them, tranquility...in the lessons of your words...some might fancy woven threads you rhyme my friend....thank you for sharing. Have a great day |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
My grandfather was a douser so this poem had a special gift for me. Enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ground to miller wheat...yeah, I feel that way too sometimes |
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