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Open Poetry #32
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Sudhir Iyer
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since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2004-05-06 06:50 AM


so speak it out now
no, not what you feel

I feel
the need to hear
what you don’t feel
and no reason needs to be
given
for not feeling what you don’t

honest
spoken words might harm
for a short while
but for the marathon runner
the elation at the end
is not for winning
but just to have
made it
there

no, not for winning,
just making it
there

anywhere
will do

scream

I shall listen
anytime

will you speak
sometime?
...

© Copyright 2004 Sudhir Iyer - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2004-05-06 08:22 AM


I feel
the need to hear
what you don’t feel
and no reason needs to be
given
for not feeling what you don’t
=================================


oh Sud.... you hit the nail on the head with that.....
felt every word and reason of that verse.
So good to have you back in the blue groovy guy.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2004-05-06 12:40 PM


BRAVO!
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2004-05-06 03:05 PM


no reasons needed are there?
Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
4 posted 2004-05-07 07:49 AM


Thanks a lot, dear friends for reading this 'scratch'

Regards
Sudhir

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