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True North Junior Member
since 2004-05-03
Posts 23 |
Waking up… there’s rain and wind Pretending it’s a sunny day I’m feeling sad and lost but still Pretending I’m okay I know I don’t see you anymore Pretending like I do Until that day that wouldn’t come When I get over you Your name is written in every place Pretending I can’t read anyway I close my eyes but I see your face I wonder when you’ll go away? I make it like I don’t need you Although I know you’re all I want It seems you can’t pretend you love me And I can’t pretend I don’t! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
It seems you can’t pretend you love me And I can’t pretend I don’t! ........ quite right it seems like that mostly... welcome to pip :-) and enjoy your stay here regards sudhir |
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Lost Awhile Junior Member
since 2004-05-06
Posts 17UK |
Oh, so sad. I feel the same right now. Even though I am with the one I love. "WE" are not the same any more and I miss us. Sorry, I should be writing about your poem, but this what it has done to me. Good words, good words. |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
 Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I hope that you enjoy it here. This is a good first post. I could feel the pain in the poem. I hope that if it's concerning you, that things will be better real soon. Hugs, Ethel |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions. Stay true to the North... it will lead you to more good poetry! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
welcome to Passions. I enjoyed your first post. And I look forward to reading more from you. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! I very much enjoyed your first post. Looking forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~ Lost in you, I found myself. ~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Some excellent lines within... Welcome ThisDiamond |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Welcome to PIP! I really enjoyed this poem! |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I meant to get to this earlier but got sidetracked.. I was attracted to your username..very cool.. As for the poem? I am still wondering the same thing...well done! And welcome to passions!! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Welcome, True North. This is a sad poem. Hoping for happy poems (and days) for you. Corinne |
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quatro Member
since 2003-04-29
Posts 392Galveston, Texas |
True North, I really liked this one. I'm look forward to many more posts as this...well done and welcome! quatro |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
The last two lines really did it for me...reminds me of myself...watch your heart...take care of your heart...James |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! how sadly beautiful |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
This remeinded me of one of Marc Anthoney's songs..."You Sang to Me" Don't ask me why???? Very good write....welcome to PIP.... |
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aujussy wolf
since 2003-08-09
Posts 1215Michigan |
Your name is written in every place  loved it , wow -wolfy |
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