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The American poet

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mrmojorisin5908
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Freedom from what we start
Coming from a perfect one
With a heart as gold as art
Coming down, the shades are low
Glow, become one above
Far arise, be crystallized
Home away from home
Alone, go, be gone away
Guilty from Mr. One Within
Great, as long as the sound performs
Trials of yesterday echo in my head
Gone to be my one love
A line of leafs of foreign green
One love above one
Rocking with Mr. Risin’, one within
Down at the Go Go we talked
Talked about art, the heart, and the end
Come to me in the city of life
Soared away by the moonlight drive
Crammed, is one so deep?
Crying away our sins of yesterday
No, no get away they’ll never go


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majnu
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a hell of a title. interesting poem but somewhat disconnected.

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Seems like scattered lines of thought.
I really enjoyed this.  Thank you.
mrmojorisin5908
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3 posted 07-17-2004 08:59 PM       View Profile for mrmojorisin5908   Email mrmojorisin5908   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mrmojorisin5908

It's dedicated to a certain poet. I'll let you guess who it is (There are clues within the art)

Andrew A.
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