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Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

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0 posted 2004-05-31 02:23 AM

I Am The Silence

i am the silence
in a world of
loud

i live within
myself
within you

i am the moment
when you forget
what you
were doing

content
merely to be

when you watch
from
within

your zone
expanding to
universe

i am

passing shadows
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displaced

1 posted 2004-05-31 02:51 AM

very cool write

iliana
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since 2003-12-05

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2 posted 2004-05-31 03:07 AM

You know I like this one!

GG
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Lost in thought

3 posted 2004-05-31 07:22 AM

I've wondered what that could be before...
and I can see now, it is.
I love it!

Always, Alyssa

Poems are made by fools like me,
But only God can make a tree.
Joyce kilmer

Martie

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4 posted 2004-05-31 10:46 AM

ED

Silence is not appreciated enough...there is always something to keep it away...some little noise of bird or distraction of thought. Thank you for bringing the moments of silence closer to my awareness.

Nightshade

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since 2001-08-31

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just out of reach

5 posted 2004-05-31 10:51 AM

Yes Ed, we should all take the time to center ourselves and feel at one with the universe. Lovely write. Chris

Life itself is the most wonderful fairy tale.
Hans Christian Anderson

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

6 posted 2004-05-31 12:30 PM

Ah, sweet meditation

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

Sunshine

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7 posted 2004-06-01 10:12 AM

i am the moment
when you forget

~*~

Sigh...

muted

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving

8 posted 2004-06-01 02:04 PM

Let me echo sunshine's sigh

she picked my favourite part!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

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the ass-end of space

9 posted 2004-06-01 03:14 PM

nice edge to this, very cool

suthern

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Louisiana

10 posted 2004-06-01 03:33 PM

I tried to select my favorite part... but the whole is so wonderful, so cohesive... I can only go mute with awe and appreciation.

gemjop
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11 posted 2004-06-02 03:58 PM

One word: Library!

steavenr
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12 posted 2004-06-02 04:01 PM

interesting...has a Zen-like serenity to it...

Sunshine

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13 posted 2004-06-02 04:44 PM

FYI...
this has been haunting me...

Marge Tindal

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14 posted 2004-06-02 06:34 PM

Ed~
Oh, I know this so well ... a favorite it will be~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

noles1@totcon.com

Fagin
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since 2004-05-07

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15 posted 2004-06-19 11:27 AM

Excellent!! I am the pause in the language of music could be added too since we use them to accent the feel..
Great!!

Susan
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since 2004-03-27

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walking the surreal

16 posted 2004-06-19 12:38 PM

Oooooh, goose bumps. This is wonderful.

Susan

The whole of the Universe resides within each individual heart.

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