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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2004-05-05 05:29 PM



It is early morning,
dawn silk
on my fingertips.
I hear the wind
but I can't feel it.
If I remember correctly,
there was a mirror in the pines,
holding me inward..


Life
is constricting so I
will become a swaying tree..
I could always feel
those gusts.

Cool
in my own shade I

am ashamed


to be
human.

© Copyright 2004 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
aujussy wolf
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1 posted 2004-05-05 05:42 PM


cool K, i'll be back to read this again for sure
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
2 posted 2004-05-05 06:46 PM


you make the needles of me stand on end...helen
Elan
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State of Wide Eye
3 posted 2004-05-05 07:15 PM



When we become one
with another manner of life...
it feels that the human form
can be such
a disappointment...

revel in your newness...
whatever form it takes.

Martie
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4 posted 2004-05-05 08:02 PM


Kaoru

Sometimes, I would rather be a tree too.  

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
5 posted 2004-05-05 08:04 PM


@&#%$*@ humans....
inkedgoddess
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6 posted 2004-05-05 11:34 PM


ditto to rafi
and yes, id rather be one with the trees if given a choice most days

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-05-06 02:56 AM


yeah...you said it...

me too

Dark Angel
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8 posted 2004-05-06 06:46 AM


Beautiful!

Maree

What are you my god? You touch me like you are my god
What are you my twin? You affect me like you are my twin.

Go Alanis!


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