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Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa

0 posted 2004-05-05 05:00 PM


There’s nothing unusual in a woman born to mourn  
or in a heart’s desire disappearing in the dawn  
yet significant and meaningful each incident of life
builds a store inside the timelessness of mind.

They’ll tumble down one day and bury us in woe
for from the bottom up each particle must flow
and line the walls of new abodes with our memories
until called upon to decorate with hindsight’s energy.  

A castle or a fortress, a mansion by the sea,
but who would say of the free houses need to be
when a field perhaps with daisies, pansies, hollyhocks,
would best absorb the ripples of an aftershock?  

To some it’s no surprise that the world of soul is wise
and able to take on board the stark experience of life
but to some the sudden impact of a naked heart
can in torture keep them stuck firmly in the past.

To advance and to know, to feel how emotional is soul,
is like a tidal wave set on destructive mode
unless first enclosed in love’s protective shield
discovered on the journey through reality’s minefield.

“Forgive me for I knew not what I had to do”
and back we come again as just another fool!  

Helen


© Copyright 2004 Helen - All Rights Reserved
icebox
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since 2003-05-03
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in the shadows
1 posted 2004-05-05 05:34 PM


"and back we come again as just another fool!"

Isn't that the truth!!!

*smile*

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
2 posted 2004-05-05 05:41 PM


Hi Icebox, I've decided not to come back!
Martie
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3 posted 2004-05-05 07:08 PM


Helen

"To some it’s no surprise that the world of soul is wise
and able to take on board the stark experience of life
but to some the sudden impact of a naked heart
can in torture keep them stuck firmly in the past."

Your words always touch a place in me that understands.  

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
4 posted 2004-05-06 12:00 PM


Dear Martie, and that place in you that understands is beautiful!
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